The Argus Deceit,
by Chuck Grossart (47 North) reads like a long, repetitive episode of The Twilight Zone. In four different
time periods, four differently-aged versions of the same character, Brody
Quail. In one version, he is an embittered and suicidal middle-aged widower; in
another, a teenager in the throes of his first serious crush; in yet another, a
disabled and possibly alcoholic veteran; and finally a happy 10-year old with
friends and an adoring younger brother. Each of these vignettes leads to
tragedy that Brody attempts to avoid as the scene re-plays itself, and as these
replays lead to even more complications, the time lines merge. It’s a nifty Twilight Zone-ish conceit that is
unfortunately marred by excessive repetition (I skimmed long passages that
remained the same from one go-round to the next) and an overly late
rabbit-out-of-the-hat denouement. Too slight for its current length, the story
would have made a more successful novella.
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